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a caring family quest chapter2 by ~gigmadesh200:icongigmadesh200:



Blaze heart had to get up early this morning because he had to help train special heart and wise heart how to use their tummy symbols so they would be ready for when the great wishing star sends them to find their first two cubs. are you two ready blaze heart said ready as we will ever be special and wise heart said.  Well lets go to the tummy symbol training area here you will learn to control you cousin call our cousin call blaze heart said. what's that? Special and wise heart said. Your cousin call   is well it will   be easier to show you with this care dummy first stand up straight find your center think nice thoughts and squeeze ok wise and special heart now you two try it blaze heart said. Right on you two did great and on your first try as well blaze heart said. Blazeheart come quick noble heart said. There's trouble down on earth noble heart said. where wise heart said?. Down there in the desert noble heart said.  Oh no its dr. fright said true heart and he's scaring two cubs we’ve got to do something let us go special heart said are you sure yes the star communicator is going pink at those cubs we have to help them come on special heart get in and hold on tight wise heart said. Dr fright Stop this at once special heart said who's going to make me you don't make me laugh dr. fright said. All right you asked for it cousin call special heart said hah not this time care bear its time to unleash my fright mirror with it my mirror will absorb your stare turn it into your worst fear and strike it right back at you dr. fright said
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second chapter of a caring family quest look for said to tell you who is talking and when they are finished

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:iconblazeheartpanther:
Good so far. But it would be esier if you had "" in your sentences like. "How do you do?" Blaze Heart saidIf you are following me

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Seeing is Believing, unless you see something that you think is unbelievable, then you have Mental Problems ^.^
:iconblazeheartpanther:
Somehow I like Dr Fright but he's nothing without technology to help him. But Cant wait to see what he is up to.

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Seeing is Believing, unless you see something that you think is unbelievable, then you have Mental Problems ^.^
:icongigmadesh200:
yes but can you understand it please tell me I put alot of work into it?
:iconblazeheartpanther:
Yes. I do understand it. Sorry I have Asperger Syndrome so there are particular things that I am picky about but I will make an exception when it comes to you.

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Seeing is Believing, unless you see something that you think is unbelievable, then you have Mental Problems ^.^
:icongigmadesh200:
so should I continue with chapter 2?
:iconblazeheartpanther:
If you so choose.

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Seeing is Believing, unless you see something that you think is unbelievable, then you have Mental Problems ^.^
:icongigmadesh200:
oh but he has the fright mirror which turns stares into their worst fear
:iconblazeheartpanther:
Oh, I Dont remember that being in the episode he was only in "The Bravest of the Brave"

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Seeing is Believing, unless you see something that you think is unbelievable, then you have Mental Problems ^.^
:iconchwen-hoou:
Not bad, need to work on your sentences a bit.

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"I reject your reality and substitute my own!"

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